| | I'm trying to figure this out. In the class called Creative Writing, we really haven't been taught how to write. We've really just been writing. And yet, I've noticed that when I write my daily journals, they are becoming much more relaxed and informal. Whether that is good or not, that's your responsibility to determine. Also, as expected, when I began two weeks ago, I had trouble coming up with 100 words. Now, my problem is just the opposite. It's almost like I'm enjoying it. Is that even possible? Anyway, I will step out of my comfort zone, as I am somehow self-conscious about my writing, and show you my first and most recent journal entries. You are free to compare. First Entry: I have been away from my older brothers and sister for a couple of years now. We moved to Monticello from Michigan in my eighth grade year, and my sister stayed there to finish college, which she has now done. My brother is also there working in the Air force. They come to visit on holidays, but it’s been months since their last visit. My other brother graduated from Monticello High School last year. He left a couple of weeks ago to go to Eau Claire for classes at the University of Wisconsin. Hopefully, I will see them all again soon. Today: Tonight has been nothing short of hectic. I, as is my tradition, was exhausted by fifth hour. Again. That’s what a tradition is, isn’t it? Anyway, I have to write this journal entry, which is interesting, as I am eliminating my complaint with every word I type. I also need to type up my Memoir rough draft, to be safe, and my journal/essay thing that I don’t really get. I also need to have a dream by Friday as well, which doesn’t help me at all. I got my Algebra 2 assignment done already, and I covered my book, so that’s a plus. I also need to draw some picture demonstrating “The Gift of the Nile” by Wednesday. I would like to find myself a biology-related article tonight, because that will leave me more time for tomorrow’s homework after the meet. After that, I need to figure out my text log sheet for English. It is 7:30 p.m. That’s over my 100 words (Actually, it’s about 20 words under 200), so I’m going to get going on those assignments now. Can you tell the difference? |
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